Red Between the Lines
2009.04.15 (Wednesday) – 8:41 pmShe was driven
fearing the ones she left behind
instead of the one she was with.
Behind her, the party
In her blood, the party
In the driver’s seat, the party.
She was crying,
the tires then were crying,
after her, was crying.
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This rough cut glass was composed in the same 30 seconds as the gem previously posted tonight. This is displayed, not because I like it, but because it shows the vastness between poems that I find and poems that I try to write.
2 Responses to “Red Between the Lines”
awesome bones here. very raw feeling which is a great match to the situation described, and such a contrast from your other 30 second “between the lines” poem
By throwshiswords on Apr 15, 2009
Thank you! I would now go on this blog every day!
Thank you
By Pett on Apr 17, 2009